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Critique by TwistedForeigner TwistedForeigner/critique/105145229">Apr 21, 2009, 7:03:37 AM
Very nice indeed. Let's examine it in a more detailed way.

Composition
The composition is quite good, the road that leads the eye (no matter how common it is) adds a nice effect that the eye can catch. The clouds are nicely placed on the sky in a way that leads the watchers's eyes directly to infinity. Nothing to say really about the crops, just that they add a good border to the image.
Drawback(s)
Although it seems you have given too much thought in the composition of the photo I believe you could do a bit better. For example, the stick that comes out of the fence on the right could be easily prevented. In addition to that you could also have not focused the main subject in the middle of the canvas and instead give a little more value to the sky or the ground.

Technique
The BW convertion surely gave a mystical and sophisticated feeling to the image, and the fading colour also made this feeling stronger. The long exposure is also contributing to giving a special mood, which is something that most viewers would like. Post process vignetting helps to focus on the main theme, too.
Drawback(s)
From a technical aspect the image is almost flawless. No blurry points, or unfocused spots.

Other comments and conclusion
All in all I believe that this image is a success. Especially what makes it worth is its good technique and nice feeling. However in my opinion the subject is a bit confusing to the watcher since you have put it in the landscape category and I would say it fits more with the surreal category. I would also add that the theme is a bit common, too.
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daxusx Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
stuning!!
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augenweide Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
your beautiful work is featured in my new journal...[link]
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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:iconaugenweide:
augenweide Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
welcome Denis...
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Ancient-Hoofbeats Featured By Owner May 1, 2009  Student General Artist
You've been featured in an article called "Like Some Far Off World..."! [link]
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner May 4, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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:iconinessentialstuff:
inessentialstuff Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Professional Photographer
Such gorgeous clouds. Beautiful composition and post-production work.
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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:icondamienvassart:
DamienVassart Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Professional Photographer
Nice light and density :clap:
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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ex3me Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Professional Photographer
:clap:
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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RIP-IKTPQ Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009
Great Photo :)
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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:iconcsipesz:
Csipesz Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Fantastic shot!!!
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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:iconcsipesz:
Csipesz Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
we deal with a winery,cca. 200m2 are vineyard
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Professional Photographer
that is great...unfortunately i am just a consumer...but in my area is a lot of people who last 15-20 years produce really great wines...
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:iconcsipesz:
Csipesz Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
if there is your opportunity,taste it you are the Tokaji aszu other wine in Tokaj,is it a Hungarian wine
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Photographer
o ,i was tasted Tokaji and i like it very much...
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:iconcsipesz:
Csipesz Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I come from that neighbourhood,where the Tokaji is prepared.
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:iconarekz:
ArekZ Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009   Photographer
nice shot :)
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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JillAuville Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:clap:
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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Jacob-Saul Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
its a deep consept... nice!
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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:iconmaciej-koniuszy:
Maciej-Koniuszy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009   Photographer
I like b/w (tone & contrast). Good photo.

Regards,
Maciej
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much,Maciej...
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:iconkeremokay:
KeremOkay Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009   Photographer
excellent !
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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ladyrapid Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Professional Photographer
Saw this while browsing around and fell for it instantly, love the darker tones and strenght, very sleak put together.

This piece is featured in my journal this week, [link]

/rob
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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anjusha Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
great work....excellent....
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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EmirKurtaran Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Cloudsss!!!

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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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Jorundr-Jorgensen Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
Wonderful tones and composition... :clap:
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much...
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horhhe Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
very good !
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you,Horhhe
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EbruSidar Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
great comp and contrast and tone and everything :D
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:icondenis2:
denis2 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thank you Ebru...
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