It is tempting to use lots of superlatives for the immediate impact of this shot - far more superlatives than there are elements in the shot in fact. The simplicity of the composition is a powerful counterpoint to the complexity of what went on at this beach in World War 2 - so many men must have died here, the beach would have been full of vehicles and men, the air alive with noise and the sounds of war. I wonder how many lost lives each of these flags represent - perhaps no-one knows accurately and completely... There is something special about the movement in these flags - in the photograph the poles and the flags almost seem to stand out in 3-D (a testament to your use of light and super-skillful post processing work), and the movement of the flags ripping in the breeze only emphasises the silence and stillness now now compared to the vision of hell this beach witnessed some 65 years ago. So - full marks for impact! I think that the square format and the partial vignetting works well to emphasize the subject matter, and the placing of the flags and the foreground in the frame is absolutely right. This critique is not critical - I cannot find anything here that could be better - the perfect marriage of technique, subject matter and story.
Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it.
To help support the Literature community we hold regular contests. It is an opportunity for you to get involved and gain some exposure. Contest winners will be featured in a news article and a journal entry--as well as other fabulous prizes. Please read this article for more information on how you can participate!
Across the globe, 27 million men, women, and children live in some form of slavery. That is more people at this moment than in all the centuries of the Atlantic Slave Trade. Something must be done. This contest serves two purposes: Raising awareness about human trafficking and raising funds for the Not For Sale organization.
Open to all mediums. Deadline is March 10, 2010 @ 11:59pm PST.
Daily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article.
In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.
Although `DEVlANT joined our community only a year ago, he's made sure to make his mark in as many ways as possible. From extensive bug testing around the site, to heading up the now infamous #devBUG Group, Martin's always eager to get involved. His inquisitive mind and enthusiastic personality is reflected in every part of the community which he reaches out to. Always eager to bring suggestions and feedback to us in a positive way, `DEVlANT shows a maturity way beyond his years. It's with great pleasure that we award very first Deviousness of 2010 t... Read More
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